Angela Sun Consulting


Essay Review

Offline essay feedback

For those who don’t want holistic consulting, we offer essay feedback and editing on a per essay basis. Instead of meeting us in person, you can share essays with us via Google Docs and get comprehensive feedback within a day. Students use our essay feedback for:

  • Common app essays and personal statements
  • College supplement essays
  • Summer camp application essays
  • Essays for English class (AP Lang, AP Lit)
  • Essays for non-English classes (AP US History)
  • In class essays
  • SAT/ACT practice essays
  • Resumes

Our essay feedback

Scales of Justice

Topic and Thesis crafting

A good essay starts with an insightful thesis and picking a topic that matches the prompt. We will help make sure that your thesis helps the reader preview the rest of the essay and is an arguable, defensible, and interesting thesis.

Organizational structure diagram


A good essay is like a great dance partner. It leads you, but you know what to expect, and it surprises you, in delightful ways. Each paragraph must contain its own unique points, but tie in well with other paragraphs and the thesis. Structuring your essay with strong transitions and logical flow will buff up your essay and ensure you get the highest possible grade.

Fish hook


A well written essay (even if it’s a historical or literary analysis essay) is interesting. Through great word choice, hooks, and interesting composition, we help you make sure your intro, body, and conclusion grab the reader’s attention.



Just like professional, published works, we will make sure your essay reads well with correct grammar, flow, and sentence structure.

When is offline feedback right for me?

We would recommend offline essay feedback for students with:

  • Short timeline or not a lot of time to invest into the process (scale of days, not weeks)
  • Busy schedule (not available to meet us during the day, want to review feedback on your own time)
  • Strong essay writing experience (you understand what is wrong based on our feedback AND how to fix it)
  • You are confident of the overall structure and just want final polishing (grammar, rewording) For other cases, we welcome our students to meet us in person.

Pricing structure

  • Up to 600 words: USD 125
  • Up to 1000 words: USD 150
  • Up to 1300 words: USD 175

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